Q3 retake work on new ancillary front cover

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As part of my resit i had to go back and look at the conventions of soap magazine front covers. i wankted to stick with the classy magazine genre so i looked at this cover of TV and SAT weekend

this is my old cover the first problem is that the shot is not big enough so the emotion isnt strong enough. also the photo isnt very strong or bright and you can still see where i have used the green screen around the hair line. also not very conventional if the fact that Afflecks Palace is all on one line where as on the TV and SAT magazine 'David Tennant' is on two lines. there is also to much negagtive space where is have my strap line making me front cover looking empty if you look at the TV and SAT  magazine david's face is covering nearly all of the cover. another problem that makes my work look unrealisitc and unproffesional is that my text down the right hand side is jolted and isnt as straight as the text down the left hand side ro improve this instead of using my mouse to line the text up i used the arrows and i also added more features. also in the top right hand corner where i have my more channels feature i made it canted just like the TV and SAT cover. i also used photoshop to lighten the background so my text would stand out even more