Q3) What i chaged about my trailer due to my audience feedback

My first draft of my trailer is very basic and i really had to work hard to make a relation between my trailer and the waterloo road trailer. i had alot of people commenting to me verbaly about how my choice of sound track(skrillex) w didnt fit with the editing of my trailer and also that my footage wasnt fitting with the sound track so through garage band i worked on the volume and also had a big cut down on the intro of the song so when the bass dropped it would be at the most intence part of the trailer . the way my footage was shown wasnt very good either because i filmed to sperete story lines takeing inspirtation from two trailers ( one neighboors one waterloo road) half way through my trailer the story line completly changed and it didnt really make sense so i swapped the first and last clip of 'you touch my baby i sware to god' and ' im jack timmons youve been sleeping with my brother and now you're gonna pay' and made one my establishing shot and the other my final clip so the trailer flowed better and the story line didnt feel so disjointed. My audience were also saying that i was givng to much information in my trailer away about the episode so i decided to get rid of a clip from one of th main character that was saying how she was left in a foster home by her best friend and thats why there were girls gangs forming in the city. Also because i was using a dubstep track the dialouge was being drowned so by using imovie i had to really  consentrate on the right balancwe between dialouge and sound track. I also didnt feel that my regional identity was being shown i wanted to make the trailer really young and fresh and to make it somthing young mancunions could really realte to with out trying to hard and putting them off so i made sure all the actors were using there natural manc accent and also by having my character wearing a jack wills hoodie and my other charcter wearing a ripped denim jacket to show class diversity. i also had my extras that were members of the rival gang wearing hoodies and having there headphone on display. i wanted my trailer to have a sense of realism so i made my natural as light as possible and also relaying that in my ancillary where i only used a brightness tool to lighten up some of the background so you could see each character indivdually. in my ancillary all of us are wearing dark clothing apart from one who is wearing white to show her inncocence. another thing that i had to change was tmy first draft og my front cover i wanted to give it a real professional look so i had to work reallyu hard with allingment of my subheadings and made sure all the writing framed the stars face.