lines of text are too far apart. Write each line separately then move them close together so they are properly anchored together. Affleck's needs an apostrophe. The blue "more channels" tab in top corner needs to be slightly tilted to bring it in line with TV and Satellite Week. Difference in size of headings and sub-headings needs to be more pronounced. :)
Really good start to your front cover. It would be a good idea to keep all of the Titles of features consistent, either all in capitals like '28 DAYS LATER' or all in just capitals at the beginning like 'Lee Evans'. :)
good start to your front cover, I like the layout of the cover, maybe have your lines more together, and make the main story line bigger so its more eye catching
I like the fact theres lots of features to keep an audience interested. The lines of text on both sides need to be colser together and "AfflecksPalace" needs to be larger to draw attention being the main feature.
lines of text are too far apart. Write each line separately then move them close together so they are properly anchored together. Affleck's needs an apostrophe. The blue "more channels" tab in top corner needs to be slightly tilted to bring it in line with TV and Satellite Week. Difference in size of headings and sub-headings needs to be more pronounced. :)
ReplyDeleteReally good start to your front cover. It would be a good idea to keep all of the Titles of features consistent, either all in capitals like '28 DAYS LATER' or all in just capitals at the beginning like 'Lee Evans'. :)
ReplyDeletegood start to your front cover,
ReplyDeleteI like the layout of the cover, maybe have your lines more together, and make the main story line bigger so its more eye catching
Good layout of the front cover, also the colours give it a proffesional look. The spacing between the features needs to be alot smaller :)
ReplyDeleteI like the fact theres lots of features to keep an audience interested. The lines of text on both sides need to be colser together and "AfflecksPalace" needs to be larger to draw attention being the main feature.
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