Images and layout are good but Laurence is a bit shadowy. "Afflecks" needs correcting! Has kind of a Waterloo Rd feel due to the strapline which I think is what you were aiming for , so that's good. Move BBC logo and programme info to bottom right- if it's in a separate space it will stand out more and you can make the strapline and name of the soap bigger to anchor it in the audiences' mind. Bit of feathering round the BBC logo that needs taking care of.
Images and layout are good but Laurence is a bit shadowy. "Afflecks" needs correcting! Has kind of a Waterloo Rd feel due to the strapline which I think is what you were aiming for , so that's good. Move BBC logo and programme info to bottom right- if it's in a separate space it will stand out more and you can make the strapline and name of the soap bigger to anchor it in the audiences' mind. Bit of feathering round the BBC logo that needs taking care of.
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