Shots are really steady and well framed. The trailer flows and leaves you wanting to know more but maybe expand a tiny bit on the storyline but don@t give too much away
really good first draft, the music choice goes well with the genre of the soap and matches the fast pased editing being used. Make the dialogue clearer in some scenes so the audience can tell whats going on instantly but the scenes picked catch the audiences attention so they want to watch more
good quick edits, clear dialogue, picked good griping moments.
ReplyDeletemaybe expand more on the cheating story just so its more clear on whats going on(:
edits are good, storylines are clear and the sound track is a good choice for the genre
ReplyDeleteShots are really steady and well framed. The trailer flows and leaves you wanting to know more but maybe expand a tiny bit on the storyline but don@t give too much away
ReplyDeleteLiked the fast paced editing and the soundtrack.
ReplyDeleteMaybe use more crossover shots to show the other storylines.
really good first draft, the music choice goes well with the genre of the soap and matches the fast pased editing being used. Make the dialogue clearer in some scenes so the audience can tell whats going on instantly but the scenes picked catch the audiences attention so they want to watch more
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